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Post by markymark261 on Feb 25, 2010 18:37:57 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by arcalian on Mar 6, 2010 17:24:36 GMT -5
It's been a long journey, and barring editorial edict, It's not gonna be over for a while yet.
I can't comment on my own story really that much, of course, except to say that it wasn't intended to be a bunch of character POV pieces, but that's the way the story came out/wrote itself. You know how stories can be that way.
As for Riz and Mark's story and it's not so mysterious narrator, I can only say that it was well written and true to the voice of the narrator. Well done.
And Beast Boy? You should be called Changeling, it's a better name. If Terra were gonna break the "fourth wall", which thankfully she isn't, she would grin nastily and point out that she doubts Donna would be willing to play. But if so, then there's several swinger parties she'd like to take you to.....
She's still scared to death of meeting the Doom Patrol, though, and this story did nothing to ease her mind on that point.
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