Letters to TT #22

[starlord]

Please let us know what you think!

[Quester]

To start with sorry about the numerous spelling and grammer mistakes I just found re reading this. And I know there will be alot of mixed response to this and if not Im guessing mostly negative but I make no repentance as this was something I had to write to round up the things I had wanted to include in a sequel to Mech D. Anyhoo just be honest. Like Star said: tell me what you think....

[starlord]

As editor I am more at falt for the mistakes, and I apologize, but please folks, don't let this stop you from reading Questers final issue of this story! It's completely different and mind bending, and a very, very entertaining read.

Personally, I would like to thank him for such a wonderful story that not only entertains, but adds another great piece of DC2 history for this title.

Great job, Sir!

[Quester]

well I whole heartedly thank you in that case.

[arcalian]

Well the who and why was clever as was the Raptor twist. And BB was very much in character, once he got out of the hospital.

Four Stars.

[arcalian]

Forgot to add, glad to see Natasha Irons.

[Admin]

I thought this was a big improvement over the last issue. While I found the explanation for the villains a bit hard to believe, it did tie up all of the coincidences nicely. On the picky front, there seemed to be an awful lot of explosions, and I might have missed a bit somewhere but Natasha Irons just seemed to get forgotten about once she'd been shot - I assume she survived.

[Quester]

ummm....no....shes dead.
No I lied. And you were right on the money...she was forgot. Oops. Yeah so in the end Vic's dad is a total wackjob and needs parenting lessons and Im glad this was received so well and as you can see I wrote this in a slightly more comic freindly way than Mech D so hell yeah theres a lot of explosions. Also thanks for the props on the Raptor scene. Its my favourite scene. I love writing Dick but for whatever reason I really didnt write about him much in this issue and what we saw was Vics point of veiw so he came across as a hardass but that scene were he broke into tears and was a little angry, crying boy was upon re-reading my favourite scene. Writing it I gave it no second thought.

[UltimateDC]

Daddy Stone as the bad guy was unexpected, but I kinda didn't like the whole "robots" twist. Yes, it fits in with who the bad guy is, but I liked the villains better as actual bad guys from the Titans past, rather then well programmed robots. Still, good wrap-up to a good story arc. Points for you.

-UDC

[Mr Clown]

K, I hate to do this but I'm gonna be completely honest here. The dialog was poor, and cliche. Also, your writing style was fairly repetitive. The amount of effort you put into building up the fact that only Vic and his dad new enough about the security systems made it obvious who was behind it.

I know this must sound incredibly harsh, but the purpose of the feedback page I thought was, to give the writers a different perspective on their works, and how they can improve. So if your offended I apologize, but this is not to be insulting, or mean, I just want to show you where improvements can be made.

Peace

[Quester]

Like I always say I want to know what people think and stuff. And to an extent the dialogue was meant to be cliched as I was trying to write in a style more inkeeping with comics which I sadly repetative and as much I tried to stay away from being repetative looks like I fell into the trap. With the whole Vic's Dad thing it took me ages to work out a way of it plausably being him and them finding out also this story had been rewritten about 3 times so some things still dont quite work out. sorry you didnt like it M.C, Ill try harder next time ;P !