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Post by Admin on Oct 3, 2018 14:21:44 GMT -5
Please let us know what you think!
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Post by HoM on Oct 4, 2018 13:12:05 GMT -5
Another great issue, one that keeps up the momentum of the debut and is able to keep revving up to higher gears! There's lots of world building going on in each scene, which I think is the right way to go at this stage of the character's existence on the site. Where is he? Where are his supporting cast? What's his world, his situation like? You're ticking all the boxes for what I consider a successful series launch, so really good work there.
I loved the glimpse into Christmas morning with Jonathan and Clark, it was so quiet and beautiful, and I'm hoping these flashbacks continue as the book moves forward. Checking in with Lois and Lana and all the rest is great, and this feels like a world that is both new and lived in, by virtue of your deft writing. Parasite and Metallo are very foreboding, I'll be interested to see how their appearances tie into their last appearances on the site... I do have somewhat of a vested interest in the direction they go in!
Keep up the good work, Eric!
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