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Joined: Jan 1970 Gender: Male  Posts: 9,906 Karma: 91 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #1 on Mar 21, 2007, 2:29am » | |
Ooo er. Nice ploy on Luthor's part!
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Joined: Mar 2006 Gender: Male  Posts: 1,216 Location: New York Karma: 56 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #2 on Mar 21, 2007, 7:56pm » | |
My favorite panels? Seeing Bats eating lunch. I don't think I've ever seen Bats eating, let alone eating fruits. Awesome.
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Joined: Aug 2005 Gender: Male  Posts: 3,070 Karma: 132 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #3 on Mar 22, 2007, 10:29am » | |
Interesting story, some real nice art and composition...!
And yet, I have to say, my favorite scene was Batman eating lunch, as well!
Don't get me wrong, I thought the Superman/Lex Luthor stuff was great, but Batman sucking soda through a straw was priceless!
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Joined: Mar 2007 Gender: Male  Posts: 200 Location: London Karma: 20 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #4 on Mar 24, 2007, 8:08pm » | |
thanks for the kind words, glad you all liked it 
work on the next part is under way ... and the artwork so far is looking better!
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Joined: Aug 2005 Gender: Male  Posts: 7,886 Karma: 1,118 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #5 on Mar 26, 2007, 4:32am » | |
I enjoyed it, although, maybe my eyesight's going but the dark background made the first lines of the captions impossible for me to read on the first three pages.
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Joined: Mar 2007 Gender: Male  Posts: 200 Location: London Karma: 20 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #6 on Mar 26, 2007, 6:57am » | |
Glad you liked it! Yeh some people have said the same about the purple text boxes at the start... I think it's to do with different screen settings. I have this professionally printed and it's fine and on my screen it's fine (I have a Sony X-Black on my laptop) but my on my Father's screen it's difficult to make out.
I'll avoid the purple/any dark-ish colours next time!
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Happy Birthday to our resident Sith Lord!
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Happy Birthday Darth! And here's to many more happy and healthy one's in the future!
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Your birthday is impressive...most impressive.
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Joined: Mar 2007 Gender: Male  Posts: 200 Location: London Karma: 20 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #10 on Apr 1, 2007, 10:59am » | |
thanks guys! lol
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Joined: Aug 2005 Gender: Female  Posts: 2,052 Location: Toronto Karma: 139 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #11 on Apr 16, 2007, 1:45pm » | |
I liked it! One thing you might want to watch... on this side of the Atlantic, we say "truck", not "lorry". I nitpick, I nitpick. Apart from that, really good stuff!
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Joined: Oct 2005 Gender: Male  Posts: 86 Karma: 11 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #12 on Apr 22, 2007, 2:01pm » | |
Very nice job. I love the scene with Batman just drinking from a soda can. So very un-Batman like, and yet you know he's had to have done it every now and then. 
Interesting plot so far, and your characterization is pretty good. The voices for all the main characters sound right. I can hear Kevin Conroy saying Batman's lines, so no worries there. Keep up the good work.
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Joined: Mar 2006 Gender: Male  Posts: 1,883 Location: Pennsylvania USA Karma: 170 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #13 on May 24, 2007, 8:06pm » | |
Finally got around to reading this. But when I did, some of the pages would no longer load, and some only halfway. That said, what I read was excellent and exceedingly clever. So Lex ain't gonna kill Supes.......he's just gonna utterly discredit him to make room for his own superteam! Which is just fine...until some kind of cosmic threat arrives.....which I'm sure it will.
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Joined: Mar 2007 Gender: Male  Posts: 200 Location: London Karma: 20 |  | Re: Superman - Order of the President 01 (of 3) (2 « Reply #14 on Jun 8, 2007, 3:36pm » | |
hey arcalian, I just did a forced refresh and the images loaded fine for me so maybe imageshack was having a bad day when you checked it out? I'll probably change the host to deviantart soonish.
Exceedinly clever you say? Great! Part two is in progress.... thanks for the comments
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